Only on Tuesdays

Check out my short story "Only on Tuesdays." I'm kinda new at writing, so I need some criticism. The link is down below :D https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ZE4ssZi0uIjafW-XawMZWKB_olVYy5dHi9l_LYP0ug4/edit?usp=sharing