PinkBlob43

Please Critique! Im new to digital art and am starting with Magma so feedback would be very helpful! :D

I just drew my band director, I gotta brand new saxophone

First full project over ever completed on here! (Besides dumb stuff like reaction images...) This technically isn't the full piece, I had to edit it on my phone because I couldn't figure out how to darken it as I found it too bright beforehand. Im okay with it but I think I can still do better. It is a redo of a piece I made on ArtRage6 and have come to hate for its minor problems and visible brush strokes.