Tell me what he should be


I’m new to art
Please tell me how I did, I’m here to improve.
Ok thank you
btw coming from an artist WAYY too obsessed with magma, you know in the blend-brush tool there's a toggle for paint? INSTEAD of the normal brush tool, it's better to use that, (it's kind of like opacity btw) and you can change colours/adjust the toggle :D (p.s. SRRY FOR YAPPI LMAO!)
His friend name is Jim and the star dog name is cat.
Hi is supposed to be him
Your welcome
RAHHH CUUTTTEEE :DD p.s. TYSM FOR LIKING ALL MY POSTSS <33